It must be his indomitable spirit. He doesn't want to be a loser. He wants to be a truly winner. Since he wants to be a winner, he practices hard. He will take the blame for victory. Maybe his team seems to be lose, but in these dangerous time, his ability will break out. And again and again, he made the miracle. That's why he became so successful.
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